Milly was 6 years old,nearly 7 she was so excited for her birthday. It wasnt all so good when she finally got the present she had been dreaming of.This is Milly's story ...
Its just one more day till Milly's birthday,shes seen a beautiful doll in the local shop window. She had been pleading her mum for so long now and her mum said when it comes to her birthday she can have it. Milly had her hopes up so her mum bought it for her. There is something strange though, every time her mum goes to the shop the dolls eyes change like last week they were open an now they're closed.
The doll is a beautiful china doll with a pretty pink dress and long black curly hair,it would be every little girls dream to have this doll.Milly's mum had promised her the doll so the day before her birthday she went off to the shop to buy it.She walked home and put it in the cupboard under the stairs so Milly wouldnt find it.The family had their dinner then went up to bed.Milly's mum got up extra early so she could wrap the doll up an put the balloons and banners up.She went to the cupboard under the stairs and yanked the door open,the doll was gone...so she carried on putting banners up in the living room and there was the doll sitting in the arm chair starring at her with big red beady eyes.
Screaming and screeching,Milly thuded down the stairs to see her present. Milly's mum handed over the carefully wrapped doll Milly teared the wrapping paper apart to finally see her dream present her eyes gleamed with excitment.At lunch time Milly and the family went out for a birthday meal she loved the doll so much she took it with her,she played with it all day. It soon come to bed time Milly left the doll on the arm chair exactly were her mum found it. The clock struck 12 midnight when Milly got woken up by an ear piercing bang! She thought it was just a dream, but then she heard little footsteps coming louder and closer. The door creaked slightly open at this point Milly was petrified. The china doll stood at her door starring at her with this time big black eyes,she pulled a sharp knife from behind her she began coming closer and closer.Milly squealed and ran to her parents room but they were not there.The china doll had already visited their room...
Good gripping story Faye well done, I like how it ended suddenly and was short and to the point
ReplyDeleteErm, amazing story, but I don't think that I am ever going to be able to look at a china doll again without crying!Xxx
ReplyDeleteVery good Faye :)
ReplyDeletethats amazing faye, love your vocab 'ear piercing bang' xxx
ReplyDeleteThats fab Fay, scary like, but amazing Xxx
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